And again! :)

Please make meaningful paragraphs and use linking words!

ZEILE FREILASSEN!!!

Diction: genaue/passende Vokabel suchen!!!

Check: if sentences!

Gleiche Zeit bleiben!

To prevent young people from taking drugs

REGISTER: humans…very formal/scientific word Better: people

Punctuation: ,    ;    -   :

Don´t write the word: THING – there are better words/be more specific

at 16 – at the age of 16 – he is a 14 year old boy – he is 14 years old

to attend school – to visit grandma

check: adj/adverb: they were treated badly

aSaPOa (HW/ always/ Zw/ WOS/  WIA/ WO/ WON)

Gleiche Zeit bleiben!!!

Stricter controls

to discriminate…unterscheiden

to discriminate against somebody…jemanden diskriminieren

to be discriminated against…diskriminiert werden

Bei is NOT by

will…werden/ want…wollen/ won´t…will not

In some cities THERE are still ghettos

people who/ things which

NO Comma before THAT

to live your life…cats have 7 lives/like: knife/knives

to do something about the problem/ it

Then…dann/ Than..als

In the morning/ in the afternoon/ at night

this girl/ these people

to go by bus/ to drive the bus (lenken)

Irr. Verbs: stand …stood…stood

side (Seite) /site (Platz)/ sight (Sehenswürdigkeit)

to go – that is too expensive (ZU)

It is full BUT: beautiful/ useful/etc.

Turks/Germans/ etc. groß schreiben!

bank/ bench (Sitzbank)

another

Murder (Mord) Muderer (Mörder)

marks/ notes (Banknoten/ Noten Musik)

Two boys/ the boy´s girl

Always

Their (ihr) / there (dort)

Thanks for these great mistakes!

Please make Paragraphs – Zeile freilassen!

aSa(always)POa(wos)a(wia/wo/won??…a play BY W. Shakespeare

BUT: you get something FROM somebody

It was written by Shakespeare IN 1595. 

no comma before that

star-crossed

people who

things which

...a play by Shakespeare

Suicide is a very dramatic topic in Austria. About 1200 people COMMIT suicide -more men than women - but it is not the way out of the problems.

THERE (dort)-THEIR (ihre)

PUNCTUATION:

Two households - the Montagus and the Capulets - are enemies.

Unfortunately, there are many couples who break up.

Finally, they decided to marry…

On the contrary, these two things are closer together than you think. 

AT the same time…

At the time the play was written….

Then/than =(als)

In Austria -  in one year - 1286 people took their lives. (like knives/wives)

…to commit suicide!!!

…happy ending:::!!!!

they meet EACH OTHER

OR: THEY MEET ON THE PARTY

No comma before THAT

To sleep for 24 hours...

Montague’s and the Capulet’s house

BUT: the Montagues and the Capulets.

THERE ARE/ THERE WERE

Achtung Sprichwörter nicht wörtlich übersetzen!

Genau nachschlagen!!! www.dict.cc

He's not quite right in the head.

http://www.dict.cc/?s=nicht+ganz+richtig+im+kopf

Yeah; sex is really important and I want to HAVE it with the right girl, when the time HAS COME

...to live your life (das Leben)

Theme…in music and literature

Topic/issue…in real life!

At the same moment

This is/ was the sad story of Romeo and Juliet

Use linking words:

http://web2.uvcs.uvic.ca/elc/sample/ite/gs/gs_38.html

SA 3a...and again:)

on the internet

Canadian, Arabic, ...Thursday

Im Englischen: Wörtert immer auseinander schreiben!!!

full … helpful

to live your life – he lives – cats have 7 lives!

Many people… much money

To be drunk!!! …drink…drank…drunk!!!

Data….Pluralwort!!!!

Word Order! aSaPO(Wos) a (Wia/Wo/Won)

this man…these men

before

catch…caught…caught…they are caught!

NO THE unless it is specific!!!!

of/from (you get something from somebody/ I come from,…)

A Novel by George Orwell

Crimes could be solved

Error File

… to be drunk (adv.)– betunken drunken (eher umgangssprachlich: a drunken party!)
…dead drunk – sinnlos betrunken
…drunk as hell – stockbetrunken
…to get drunk – sich betrinken
…drunk as a lord – voll blau
…drunk/drunken driving – Alkohol
…knee-walking drunk – AE – voll blau

… drunken (adj.)
…drunken bet – wette im Suff
…drunken woman
…drowning – ertrinken
…it´s ok to drink a pint of beer at the age of 16
…Great Britain
…Wrong: And so that are very often problems. Right: So the are often many problems

...

You have to avoid these mistakes!!!!

Im Wörterbuch genau nachschauen…nicht irgendein Wort nehmen!

Ihr habt manchmal unglaublichen Blödsinn geschrieben!!!!

Double-check!!!

Who…für Personen…the people who…

Which…für Dinge… the ships which…

the theories which (NOT they!!!!!!)

Im Englischen Wörter auseinander schreiben

Immer in der gleichen Zeit bleiben… Zusammenfassung: Past Tense 

(was vorher passiert ist Past Perfect Tense …had+3. Form)

Word Order

aSaPO(wos?)a (wia, wo, won?)

to seach for information on the internet

on TV

on the radio

it´s… it is 

BUT: its wheels (the wheels of the car)

from… nur wenn man etwas bekommt!!!!

I got the picture from her!!!! Habe es bekommen!

SONST: of!!!!!!!!!!!

Irregular verbs lernen!!!!

http://www.englisch-hilfen.de/grammar_list/verbs.htm

there…dort BUT: their…ihr

I  am interested in politics

it is interesting ...

foreign policy… Außenpolitik

politician… Politiker

The people are afraid of sth.

Do do something about the problem!

We have to do something about it!!!

We need too much energy!!! To reduce our energy consumption will be very important!

This ship/ these ships

That ship/ those ships

Sparen: to save energy

Rettern/ sichern: to safe the passengers

No comma before that!!! I thing that it is ….

Eigennamen groß schreiben!!! The Titanic, the Pentagon 

Conspiracy theory… conspiracy theories

Boy-boys…lady-ladies

The ship was damaged in an earlier crash.

Before

Another

It is interesting- im am interested in something

In der Nähe… near Admont/ next to/ in the area of…

Eigene Meinung… my personal opinion… in my opinion there is…..

Plan (der Plan)- plain (eben/flach) -plane (Flugzeug)

Everbody knows

To take – he took … to+1.form des Verbs J Please!!!!!

Don´t write the word THING…there are better words…be more specific!!!

Too small…too big to sink..zu!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bigger than…als

Then he went on…dann ging er weiter

Much…viel…viel Geld

Many…viele… many people

They couldn´t be saved …be +3.From..Passive

Everybody knows…nobody knows…everybody thinks that….

Get…bekommen BUT: become…werden

To live your life… cats have seven lives/ WIE: knives/ wives/etc.

Wenig Artikel verwenden: I go to University, I go to school

I live in …

the UK, in the Burgenland, in Tyrol, in the Netherlands

  

really

people should think … we are thinking about sth.

To build a ship … the ship was built!!!

On my side (SEITE) BUT: website – camping site – football site/ground..PLatz

In my view!!!

Etc.

Keep on working!!!!

You will be asked the Error File after x-Mas

:)

Please make meaningful paragraphs – Links and conjunctions

Stick to the same Tense!!!

Redewendungen nicht wörtlich übersetzen!!!!

KISS – keep it short and simple!!!

Don´t write the word:  thing – there are better words – be more specific!

to see a UFO – it´s the pronunciation which is important: ju!

But an apple – a boy

The American people

to lose – it is loose (nicht angebunden, lose)

this boy/these boys

that boy/ those boys(weiter weg)

these young persons (formal/register!!!)– these young people (better)

at the age of 16, at 16

I want to tell you something about drugs.

Don´t write: how shit drugs are (register!!!!) how dangerous !!!!

aSa(always)PO(wos?)a(Wia-Wo-Won?)

I sometimes want to drink a good pint of beer slowly, with my friends, near the river, on weekends 

He plays basketball very well =aSaPOa

Your driving ability can be affected - the effect is that 

He – persons  - his/her

It – things/devices/animals  its

Every dog has its day!!!!

To prevent somebody from doing something

To prevent young people from dinking and taking drugs

First, there are many…

First, I´ll tell you something about…

Consequently, I want to mention that….

Brave – tapfer!!!

They have less protection…they are less protected

Wörter im Englischen immer auseinander schreiben!!!!

reaction time, road accidents

my personal opinion

die Jugend = young people

…the movie touches especially young people…

…you have to tell them about the consequences of taking drugs…

…you forget about your problems.

We have too much to do!

His dead body – he is dead – death is cruel

I will talk about my personal opinion about this topic.

drink-drank-drunk

they are drunk – a drunken party

the children are drunk - the boy is drunk

they are drunk -

teach – taught - taught

a Catholic private school

it is worth watching

cigarette – cigarettes

the consequences – to follow somebody

to seach for information on the internet

1s The Paranormal

examples of paranormal activities
then/thanif this murder didn´t happen, my father couldn´t buy the house If-Sentences!!!
the universe is bigger than…
technology/ skiing techniquethey are frozen
at full moon !!!by is NOT beithis transformation can be avoided when he is killed … be+ 3. Form
having such illnesses the people…
some paranormal phenomena exist
last year there was …
I am scared of…
this is surely not a good idea
things that/which you can´t explain
a mystery/mysteriousthey were built form the Vikings
you often can see such stone circles in Scandinavia
this circle/ these circlespeople who have seen
all these people who …
for me there exists only one
local is not LOKAL (e.g. Loch Ness)in the Middle Ages many people believed in … Stone Age
there (dort)/ their (ihr)there is no evidence
they don´t have any evidence (singular – no Plural – like sheep)since many, many years the sailors have tried to
today we know the reason for/ why…
it could be something innocent and not a paranormal phenomenon
in my hometown there aren´t any...
for me some things are
but these corn circles were never made during the day
to believe in sth – a strong beliefa place where UFOs have landed …
experts think that
many people
the telling about / the story about…
the doors opened on their own
the stories are very topical – actually = tatsächlich