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aSa(always)POa(wos)a(wia/wo/won??…a play BY W. Shakespeare
BUT: you get something FROM somebody
It was written by Shakespeare IN 1595. 

no comma before that
star-crossed

people who
things which

...a play by Shakespeare
Suicide is a very dramatic topic in Austria. About 1200 people COMMIT suicide -more men than women - but it is not the way out of the problems.

THERE (dort)-THEIR (ihre)

PUNCTUATION:
Two households - the Montagus and the Capulets - are enemies.
Unfortunately, there are many couples who break up.
Finally, they decided to marry…
On the contrary, these two things are closer together than you think. 



AT the same time…
At the time the play was written….



Then/than =(als)

In Austria -  in one year - 1286 people took their lives. (like knives/wives)
…to commit suicide!!!

…happy ending:::!!!!

they meet EACH OTHER
OR: THEY MEET ON THE PARTY

No comma before THAT
To sleep for 24 hours...

Montagues and the Capulets house
BUT: the Montagues and the Capulets.

THERE ARE/ THERE WERE

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He's not quite right in the head.
Yeah; sex is really important and I want to HAVE it with the right girl, when the time HAS COME

...to live your life (das Leben)

Theme…in music and literature
Topic/issue…in real life!

At the same moment
This is/ was the sad story of Romeo and Juliet

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